I'm going to cry. No. I've already started crying. I hope your happy you made a loving fan cry because you won't update. T^T the tears... the won't stop...

This has got to be one of my favorite dream sequences ever - absolutely gave me chills.

Too bad. It was fairly good. Just too bad.

oh man what a bummer! aw darn. please continue. i have it on my faves so if theres ever an update, ill get to it right quick!
luck.

woo hoo! yay! awesome chapter!

this chap was a hoot to read! amazingamazingamaing!

lol. this chapter was fun to read!

ARGH! i cant believe zack did that! oh boohoo, im stressed, take me pain away! bah! shame on him!!
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ok, and this chap totally made me tear up in the flower field...aw

oh man!
things are a MESS!
the sky is cloudy... when will the sun shine?lol

woah wasnt expecting that. no way seph should know that. its either the maako or the cetras?
will could be taking a trip to aeris now?

mam im totally loving the story. i just found it tonight too... ive been missing out!
its getting realy interesting!

its starting to pick up... he getting back to his ol self... im starting to enjoy the story now.

I actually read this unfortunatley unfinished masterpiece on a different site and thus had not yet reviewed but I did leave an all encompassing review in you LVJ private message box as I was skulking about your profile page. I also noticed the dreaded words "on hiatus" with regards to the afore mentioned masterpieces and allow me to whine in my most petulant 3 year old tone of voice that I HATEUS HIATUS! NO FAIR NO FAIR NO FAIR!

I have been reading this story with my roommate (who has been a fan of it for years, and considers it the best fic she's ever read) for the last few days, and I have to thank you for writing something this amazing. I had never played the game before, but your story has inspired me and I'm halfway through the game now.

I'm reviewing this on chapter 15 because I know that If I review 16, you'll hear nothing but "PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD CONTINUE THE STORY" from me, and I'm sure you hear enough of that from your other devoted readers.

So thanks again, and I'm moving on to 16 now.

You are a wonderful author. I read this story over and over again, whether it is unfinished or flawed. To me, it's one of the best stories I ever read and I'm sorry if you've heard that a lot - but that just shows how true it is. Even if you're not proud of your work. I read your other stories too and they're as wonderful. I understand if you don't have the motivation to update and I'm not trying to pressure. I know you might not read this comment but just saying you've written a beautiful piece, maybe unfinished or flawed, but still beautiful.
Thank you for writing such wonderful sixteen chapters. Keep up the good work (on your stories)~!