|Reviews for For the First Time|
| I AM ANONYMOUS 4/5/13 . chapter 11
You know, this is one of the better Laven stories out there. It isn't too deep and emotional, but it isn't all rainbows and unicorns. I like the developments; there'll moderately paced. All I'm asking is that you speed up the updates, or make longer chapters. Just a suggestion... Also, I feel that Lavi and Allen are a tad bit too trusting. If you've read the manga, which I'm assuming you have, even after a loooong time of them being together, they still haven't told each other their backstories. Damn. Anyways, that's basically my only complaint. Otherwise it's really good.
ANONYMOUS IS OUT! PEACE!
| mamita 3/2/13 . chapter 11
Hello, I liked your fic, hopefully upload more chapters, my favorite couple is LavixAllen, are so tender and warm, that bad Allen, Lavi look to leave alone, should have chosen to Lavi, I think it was pretty clear, lol, I hope you make more fics of them, keep it up, thanks and kisses.
| AmnesiacForIkki 2/25/13 . chapter 3
Poor Lavi hit his head under the bed - but he shouldn't be sleeping under there in the first place, silly usagi :)
School is such a drag Allen don't fall for ittt
| AmnesiacForIkki 2/24/13 . chapter 2
Those clothes sound cooooll. I want themmm :D
And Lavi and Allen are roomies! Ohohoho, what kind of debauchery can they get up to?
| FortunateWhisp 2/19/13 . chapter 11
Yeaaaaah, hi! I don't know if you would notice this, but I'm that person who just reviewed for a while, forgot about the story, and thought it's be in the Rated M section. I also had 'Ember' in the name as well.
Okay. I honestly did not want to review because (and this has nothing to do with your writing, as it is usually perfect) the review count was stuck at 69. And this is a slash fanfiction. And my mind went in the total gutter and I couldn't stop thinking of... Images. /shot
Haha, anyway, Allen's almost unconscious thoughts that always wander back to Lavi are so cute. Actually, I can't describe this chapter as anything but cute. ;;
| Synk 2/18/13 . chapter 11
she finally found out! yay! and i dont mind the spelling at all, cant wait for more!
| Izzywing 2/14/13 . chapter 11
Haha! So at the bottom of chapter 11, the summary/authors notes were too long so I skipped over it and read the last sentience, as I did, I started cracking up madly!
| AmnesiacForIkki 2/9/13 . chapter 1
The chapter is very well-written! I feel like I'm in the school along with Allen :)
| ResonantWings 2/9/13 . chapter 11
Awwwwww lavi was missing out. He got a scarf though! Lenalee and Allen had a moment there too and it was really cute :) Thanks for the update!
| Zaryin 2/7/13 . chapter 10
Aw poor lavi... can't wait for more!
| ResonantWings 2/3/13 . chapter 9
PANDAAAAAAAA and allen all wrapped up around it awwww so cute why do you make things so cute :O
| ResonantWings 2/3/13 . chapter 8
I can't believe I forgoot to review this chapter! It was a cute one too, especially with lavi finding out that allen cheats :)
| ResonantWings 2/3/13 . chapter 10
Awwww Allen why would you do that to Lavi? The poor guy didn't do anything to you! Thanks for the chapter no matter how short! :)
| Original-Character-Disorder 2/2/13 . chapter 10
Awwww! Poor Lavi XDD Allen owes Lavi BIG X3
| CrimsonDeath413 2/2/13 . chapter 10
Gah! You are so mean to leave it there! *pout*
I really like the way you write! Explaining everything in detail but still getting to the point! So can I be awaiting for chapter 11 of this amazingly written story?
Have a nice day and or night, kind sir and or madam!