its good can't wait till you read the rest of the story.

Beautiful chapter.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

this is the first chobits fic I've ever seen, so sweet! I feel all mushy now.

yay! another chobits fic! i'm totally in love with the manga for this as well, and i have to say that you do a pretty good job with the characters. you must be a very avid reader. . i loved the ending of this fic. it was so kawaii!

aww..._ How cute. You're a great writer! Keep up the good work!
ChiHideki forever!
Joy

Heh...Chobits is really a nice series...even with the adult theme, it puts forth a kind of "what if" feeling that only an older person could fully understand. This one's good...maybe not as good as your really long one, but still great! I'm going to see if I can read any more of your works tonight before I crash at the comp...and it looks like it'll be more than worth it! Review #2!

Quite the amazing lil' writer aren't you?
I can't understand why it's so hard to turn one thought to words when it comes to a book, yet it's so easy when one is talking to anyone, even themselves.
I love this lil' snippet of fiction.
Sincerely,
Lord Aries Greymon

I love your fic! It's really sad in a way that i like it so0o0oo much. ive been meaning to read angst fic but i got caught up finishing my own fics and gots no time to read angst. well, i think you really nailed it! woohoo!

::cheers from the crowd::

Kawaii-Lovey

please

UPDATE

dude! that was so good. hurry and write more ok cause i can't wait. this chappie was so romantic and you just have to keep this story goin on

Hiya, this is pretty good. I would revise how you say some sentences, but elsewise this is good. I do hope you intend to continue this story. Good job.

Yui Miyamoto,

Aw, that was such a nice little fic! smiles I really liked how it was written from Hideki's point of view. Great job!

Write more,

Kaehimi

that was cute. and same here. i love the manga.

great fic love the angsty-ness

Now its my 4th. Well, keep going.