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| Reviews for The Wings of Freedom: Volume Two |
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   Persephone Rosamunde 1/7/13 . chapter 20It's over (tear). No more Kurama. On a lighter not I think that was your best intro skit yet. I was laughing hysterically by the end, but am i really that much of a fangirl? Baka. Get to writing! |
| Persephone Rosamunde 12/31/12 . chapter 19 Excellent as always but I found a new Kurama background like a week ago. |
| Persephone 12/24/12 . chapter 18 Excellent chapter as always. The skit was quite amusing, and sounded slightly familiar... By the way, quite playing video games and get work on volume 3. |
| PR 12/17/12 . chapter 17 I got to do the disclaimer! I dk why that excites me... Anyway excellent as always! Keep writing! |
| TheAbsolutistsCreed 12/10/12 . chapter 16 I think another of his favorite spells is "Silence" haha. |
| Persephone 12/10/12 . chapter 16 Excellent as always. A few minor mistakes I must have missed in reading it previously but otherwise good. Keep writing! And stop torturing poor Gnocx! |
| Persephone Rosamunde 12/3/12 . chapter 15 Should be "their" not "there" in a couple instances. A couple other minor errors, but excellent as always. the dialogue does not suck so stop saying it does! And how dare you threaten me! Maybe I want to reveal the next world you throw your poor unfortunate Gnocx into! |
| TheAbsolutistsCreed 11/26/12 . chapter 14 Welp... that was unexpected. And a bit of history too, so NOW they are more willing to find him given that they will have a Keyblade working against them eventually. |
| Persephone Rosamunde 11/26/12 . chapter 14 If you don't delete that video you will regret it. Anyway, excellent as always. Don't be lazy and start writing. |
| TheAbsolutistsCreed 11/19/12 . chapter 13 "I'll. Be. Right. 'Ere." xD Now time for me to cork out, adios until next time. Zzzzzzz |
| Persephone Rosamunde 11/19/12 . chapter 13 Baka. Excellent as always. Keep writing. And you really need to write your shattered wings fic. |
| TheAbsolutistsCreed 11/12/12 . chapter 12 Huh, passing off Yusuke's consciousness when sleeping as this. It's a nice starting point for his later training. I'd love to actually go through something like that myself, though I'm probably not going to be happy about the Z's i lose over it and most likely blood. And the thing about the TV needed to be said anyway, it IS a plot hole that was never really explained unless spontaneous combustion is a natural phenomenon... |
| xFlowersofDarkx 11/12/12 . chapter 12 Lol. Cool chapter and the omakes were really funny(more so disturbing) but still humorous! xFlowersofDarkx |
| Persephone Rosamunde 11/12/12 . chapter 12 (sigh) Gnocx needs someone. You're so cruel to him. A little romance wouldn't hurt him (or you for that matter, oh great creator of such a lonely and unfortunate character). Anywho, excellent chapter as usual. Get to writing! |
| Persephone R 11/5/12 . chapter 11 Don't you dare discontinue the skits! We must find out if Kurama saves us! Anyways...excellent as always. Keep up the good work. |
