me gusto mucho, ojala hubiera una historia completa de su romance despues de la serie jajaja...bueno, muchas gracias y adios.

Cute!

This is very sweet. The only think I may suggest is using a different variety of he's/ she's; perhaps their names, and other descriptions.

A very simple, yet beautiful story on these two. I love the descriptions you put of each action they partake in- it's very effective, the imagery you manage to convey in just 239 words is just simply amazing. Since this is such a short story, there really isn't much to say, but I love the gestures that Munto does for Yumemi- it adds a lot of subtly and meaningfulness to the weight of their unique relationship, even moreso in the series. And I too, love the thought of a wedding kimono. Splendid job. :)