|Reviews for Ordinary Chocolate|
| alannah 11/10/12 . chapter 1
i love charlie and the chocolate factory wish i ahd the movie
| DarkMousyRulezAll 10/29/12 . chapter 1
This is a GREAT story You capture the characters and the wild fun imagination of the whole place very well
I love the idea of the Ordinary Chocolate :D Very creative, and also kinda obvious but that's what made it creative XD
Excellent excellent work I was simply captivated.
Now is this a one-shot? *checks back up to see* yes it is. Ah well. I'll be looking forward to more awesome stuff :D
| dionne dance 10/7/12 . chapter 1
I loved this story - the way the factory responds to Willie is amazing!
| Serendipity's tears 9/23/12 . chapter 1
When Oliver Twist asked for more, it echoed my thoughts on this perfictly! :D
| Guest 8/30/12 . chapter 1
"It baffled him, but he rather enjoyed being baffled - it was one of his favorite pastimes, right up there with baffling others." Love this bit.
| Turrislucidus 8/30/12 . chapter 1
Ordinary Chocolate is brilliant and so is this magical story! Wow.