i love charlie and the chocolate factory wish i ahd the movie

This is a GREAT story You capture the characters and the wild fun imagination of the whole place very well

I love the idea of the Ordinary Chocolate :D Very creative, and also kinda obvious but that's what made it creative XD

Excellent excellent work I was simply captivated.

Now is this a one-shot? *checks back up to see* yes it is. Ah well. I'll be looking forward to more awesome stuff :D

-DMRA

I loved this story - the way the factory responds to Willie is amazing!

When Oliver Twist asked for more, it echoed my thoughts on this perfictly! :D

"It baffled him, but he rather enjoyed being baffled - it was one of his favorite pastimes, right up there with baffling others." Love this bit.

Ordinary Chocolate is brilliant and so is this magical story! Wow.