Reviews for Dysfunctionally Yours
tsunachi 2/18/13 . chapter 3
Oh my gosh. Amazing much?

I cracked up in that second chapter. The imagery was just too vivid. I guffawed silently because otherwise I would have looked like a mental child. I really did. It was that funny.

*applause*
Shubhs 12/24/12 . chapter 3
Holy-
Wow.
Neji.
Wow.
::Brain Dead::
-beep- -beep- -beep- -beep-

GAHAHAHAHAHHAHA! XD

Pretty well written. Quite funny. Tenten is adorably cute. :P
bright-rebellious 12/20/12 . chapter 3
This... is one of the most epic stories I've ever read; it's surprisingly funny and interesting, and I can't seem to stop reading. Amazing. :)

Good luck,

BR.
TwistedRaver 12/18/12 . chapter 3
I absolutely love this.
I'm still giggling.
kaname's harisen 10/18/12 . chapter 3
Ok, so this sort of just made my day. My dog has been staring at my like I'm a crazy woman because I've been giggling so hard. I've only watched 1 episode of Naruto SD, but I think I'll have to watch some more now. Great job. Love the premise, love the pairing, but most of all, I love Ino in this. She's got the best lines.
SnowStar145 10/14/12 . chapter 3
This story is TOO fricken funny. I love it. Neji's adorable, and Tenten's a funny drunk xDDD I love it, and it's REALLY original. :)
QueenP19 10/6/12 . chapter 3
OMG! Love it. Hoping the next chapter comes out soon! ;)
steenta112 10/2/12 . chapter 3
I love this! More Naruto SD with NejiTen, Please! :) It's awesome! I hope she figures it out. Poor Tenten thinking he's gay.
swartzvald 9/28/12 . chapter 3
Good stuff would love to see more. Liked naruto SD Tenten finally gets to DO stuff! Though for some reason the romeo and juliet skit had HINATA in it. The hell?
summerrain12 9/26/12 . chapter 3
This... omfg... I must read more, i am now obsessed with this fanfiction. please write more!
Dreaming101 9/20/12 . chapter 3
Haha! I never have compared someone swimming and looking like an otter as hot.. but hey, its Neji, his hottness can deem anything he wants as hot as him... lol! Great job on this!
Dreaming101 9/20/12 . chapter 2
Haha! I'm imagining Neji all tarzan-like... and on the cover of romance novels all Fabio-like... while flipping his beautiful hair all hair commercial-like... hahahaaaa! Awesome job on this!
Dreaming101 9/20/12 . chapter 1
Great first chapter! :)
AngelicalMistique 9/17/12 . chapter 3
Yeah! Please tell me somebody has that on camera! Would not mind seeing it! Can't wait for the next chapter! Can't wait to know what happens next! I really really really do! Ohhh how I just love this story!

Keep it up
AM
Paper Lanterns And Yogurt 9/16/12 . chapter 3
"Hinata still looked poleaxed"

I love the use of words here to describe her confusion. Being poleaxed is a very strong implicit use of diction and it gives the reaction an even more humorous. jk it's a spelling error but poleaxed is a real word.

Nice writing! I wonder what your favorite chapter/episode is? Tenten becoming Mr. Leaf is probably mine. Hope you have fun writing more chapters!
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