Loved the story. You're a great writer, you captured their thoughts and emotions really well.
Like i said loved the story (especially the last paragraphs). Keep up the good work \(u)/

This was incredible. I love that you explored the PTSD Rapunzel must've felt after having her entire world turned inside out and ripped into shreds. I love that you had Flynn arguing with himself about what was best for her. I love that their emotional problems weren't easily solved. I love the wrapped-up-but-open-ended ending. This was brilliant from start to finish. Well done!

This was very good! You are a very talented writer!

gross hate it no offense but they need to met the parents

This is just sooo perfect, so damn cute! They are really adorable here, and I just totally could see that happening on the movie. I love it 3

Wow. That was one heck of a trip back. I liked it.

Oh my goodness. I'm in love with this story. You did an amazing job. This was Awsome. Great job. :)