I promised myself (and you, I believe) that I would review, after being so bad at just reading and not reviewing so here it is. I like where the story is leading to - I didn't think Jarek even had a partial heart the way things were going in the previous chapters. However, knowing what he is capable of, Sabrina really wishes she never got caught. You caught me off guard when he was "nice enough to give her the handcuff keys (albeit just out of range of her hands and she knows she can't reach the darn things). After reading all the "nice" things Jarek already did to her in previous chapters and in this present chapter, I thought he was born heartless and your ending proved to me that his devious smile when Sabrina cried out in frustration proved it to me beyond a shadow of a doubt! (I hope Sabrina does find a way out, and survives this story and makes Jarek wish he didn't leave the key and kill her instead!)

Oh...Vorre...! You truly have the measure of such an insidious..purely nasty guy like Jarek. Hats off to how you fully get across his grossly gloating persona...! And even as he plays with Bri's fear...she only admits... some tiny detail when he threatens Kelly n Kris...this makes...Bris character ...stand out so much more than the show ever did Bri justice! Aah... Just pure brilliance here! Ya know we rate you v highly here..so...be assured...we think you rock! x

Sorry, I should have posted my reviews for you religiously like I did for some other stories. But please don't end it without bringing this story to an end - I really enjoy reading your story (enjoyed your East Coast Angels too). This story has it all - and suspense is the biggest of them all. I can't wait 'til your next installment.

Naaaaaasty! Jarek the Bone Snapper! Aahh VdV! Mistress of Suspense! Kelly n Kris need to get to Bri...fast. Suffocation now an issue...methinks...grah. Totally Top Fic Vorre..yep..you did it again girl! (now...wheres me laptop...?!)

Uh oh finally Bri is about to think of something helpfull hopefully!

Oh my...
VdV! Wth has just happened to Bri.?!..my imagination...omg! This is so gritty and... intelligently written...am left almost gasping with fear for Bri! Now ... how on earth are Kelly and Kris...going to sort this? And...the aftermath?!
Time and time again am left feeling exceptionally intertained by this story! Now...don't leave us too long eh?! (sez me!)

And of course you just had to leave it there didnt you...

ahh..oops sorry for delay in reviewing Vorre..i hadnt forgotten! So..yiu know...am ...so impressed with how you have weaved this story...Falcone...Carl Douglas...poor Henry ...and how the angels have got personally involved. Its all... so well thought out and balanced..i look forward immensely to your updates! Now...wth is going to happen to Bri ... even after listening to Douglas..mmm...Well done! Top stuff! x

This is getting heated up and I wonder how the hell will Bri make it out of this.

oh great ending there Vorre! Tension tension! Sabrina seems ... too quiet... been taking some stuff from Jarek...gah. Takes a lot to pipe Bri down...mm! Now Kris and Kelly both realise...you just can't trust fellas! heh...no matter how genial and nice they seem! How is this going to play out? I have no idea...but just cant wait for your next update...am loving how you work here...great work! ;-) x

Weeeell Sabrina seems into a lot of trouble right now! I like the plot very much VDV

Oh...uh ...ooohhhmygaaad! Yeeeeks... Vorre...you just. oh my gawd...! Kelly n Kris...pattering around with Sullivan... unable to do Anything but wait and watch and wait...! And Bri is taking all the heat for everything. Boy... Jarek ...nice name...shame about the occupation! (I know 2 Jareks locally heh!) oh Vorre...this fic is... simply...unputdownable! Every tenor ... every note...every cadence of your work... ...spot on...! Even in the run up to... what promises to be a fab finale...you never let slide your work for detail, accuracy, character build...the whole works...you let nothing slip...Huge respect! Now ...tch...suspense...grah... cant wait fer weekend update...! :-) xxx

gah...heh heh! You plot spinner you ! Oh I love it! Carl gets his come-uppance...yeesh! Well...you play in the gutter in running spikes...u likely to get bloody! pfft! Now...is Kelly next?! oh Vorre...what a great chapter...another slap on the back there! ;-)...don't go away now...! ;-)

heh heh...'going somewhere Mr Douglas?' ! aah...hope he gets his! Bosleys snapping at Henry...good stuff. Bosleys worry usually shows..! V v nice chapter Vorre...this pace...its great...keeping Jarek on his leash.. for now...like it! and how long is Henry likely to survive...either way..mm... am here n waiting...heh! ;-)

Great start! Quick question, is this before or after your last CA story took place? I just want to get my timeline right.