|Reviews for Prey|
| RossiJones456 1/10/13 . chapter 1
I...I don't know how I should feel about this...I really want to yell at you for killing off 101 but you're one of my favorite authors. BUT THEY WERE MY OTP. I CAN'T GO ON JUST FEED ME TO THE MACHINE.
| Barn Owl Girl 11/26/12 . chapter 24
Hey! Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long, I've just been so... busy. This was really, really good. It's kind of sad that /Prey/ is over so soon, but I can't wait to see what you have in store next! :D
| Freida Right 11/25/12 . chapter 23
Oh gosh, what a happy ending! :D Got any plans for the rest of the clan?
Can't wait to see what will become of the other happy couple!
| Guest 11/22/12 . chapter 22
A lovely ending! And there will be an epilogue, yes?
Ooh, I'm excited to see where 47 and 81 will go! Haha, lol, I'd have more to say if it weren't 1 am. 8/ I'll get back to you when my head is on straight.
| Freida Right 11/19/12 . chapter 21
This... No. This can't be happening! You can't kill 10 off NOW of all times!
Although, this was a terrific death. 8/
One thing. Just as 109 is raising the bullet, and pointing one end of it somewhere... Yeah, somewhere in that whole sequence, something in the wording went slightly wrong. And that's all I have to negatively critique. All the rest of it was terrific!
| 5x10 Love 11/19/12 . chapter 21
Ho shit! "Off with your head!" Way to go Alice-I mean 10. :) Don't die, plz. :'(
| AngelPik 11/18/12 . chapter 20
Okay, first off (as my first time posting a review on this story) I'd just like to say that I love how you write your characters. They're all solid and three-dimensional with their own personalities, thoughts, and feelings, which is quite an amazing feat considering how many characters you have in this story.
One minor criticism however, is that in this section 10's reply needs to be in italics;
"Are you sure you're all right to battle a machine?"
I'm fine. I smiled at her and we took each other's hands.
Apart from that however, I really liked this chapter and am eagerly awaiting the next update with the final battle with the Hunter!
| Freida Right 11/16/12 . chapter 20
Once again, concentrating all your power in a smaller chapter has won the day. This. Was. EXCELLENT! The timing was perfect, the action was intimate and heartfelt. Plus we've got almost all of the second gen-punks on board.
It's terrific to see 10 doing stuff now. She's a sturdy and feisty kid, for all of her parent's fussing. 4 and 6 have never given her enough credit, and I feel that it's effectively led the audience to underestimate her, as well. But I've never been so sure of that. I've always had a lot of faith in 10, and that she could be an excellent resource, if she were given the chance. Well, here she goes! :D
| Freida Right 11/11/12 . chapter 19
ACK, it took me entirely too long to make it through this! But it was lovely!
The only thing I feel compelled to point out is in the first paragraph of 15's POV. She digs through a cupboard until she finds what she's looking for, even though she has no idea why it's there. Seems a little... Contradictory. Not like when she's looking for the paraffin, because she's seen it in there and knows that it's there.
But that's the only thing that stuck out in this chapter. Pretty good! :D
| 5x10 Love 11/10/12 . chapter 19
GAH! The feels!
47 and 81 would make such a good couple! I've always liked them together, but I've always put these thoughts aside because you've said they aren't into each other. NOW THERE'S HOPE!
| Freida Right 11/4/12 . chapter 18
Yay, 8 getting hit with stuff! 8D
I knew that 109 would take this better than his dad. He LUUUUUUVs her!
| Freida Right 11/3/12 . chapter 17
Consarnit, 11, why'd you have to die? After all he's been through, everything he's done and survived, he's killed by a brick.
| 5x10 Love 11/2/12 . chapter 17
NOOOOOO! NOT 11! D'X
| Freida Right 10/31/12 . chapter 16
Wny is 12 screaming? D8
Fingers crossed she's just horrified at 9's very poor condition...
When everyone else finds out that 8 was hitting 10, I wonder what they will do...? 6 should smack him over the head with something. :P
| Freida Right 10/29/12 . chapter 15
"Where's your pretty daughter, 7?"
I fell out of my chair, lauging like an insane person, "I GET THAT REFERENCE! I GET THAT REFERENCE! AND WHY ITS RELEVANT!" XD
I can't express how much I LOVE how in-character 7 is. A whole chapter from her POV? Awesome! All action-packed and tense! She's such a warrior-and yet, such a woman at the same time. The ending was so perfectly sweet. :D