This excellent story is worthy of honour in itself, especially as you show the two characters so canonically and the dialogue feels natural and real as well.

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This was just glorious.

Great little interaction between these two awesome characters. ) Moses did owe her an apology! I love the way you had her accept the apology in a very Tzipporah-ish way. A lot of people would have messed that up and made her act like a... well like a jerk and think it was funny. You really got her true character to show through.

Absolutely loved it! I just watched this movie again for the first time in forever, and still am in love with the Moses Tzipporah (the movie got her name wrong! It's Zipporah!) pairing. Surprisingly your the only author with this pairing.

Nicely written, loved it!

I enjoyed this little story, it was beautifully written and creative. Going in my favourites. Good work.

I like it.

yes. yes. yes. just, all of the yes.
in this lovely little segment, you've addressed something that always bothered me in this film: Moses' initial treatment of Tzipporah. I love how you've worked this scene into the existing canon of the movie and made it work. great job, keep it up!