Brilliant story! I liked it very much and loved how you portrayed Lewis and Hathaway! It's absolutely adorable when Robbie takes care of his bagman. ;)
Nice questions in the quiz by the way.
In hopes for more, your Melfis.

Loved both this and its sequel. James and Robbie are perfectly in character, and the dynamic between them is very well explored.
Happy holidays, and thanks.

Regards,
Lem

Wonderful story. I thought you got the character interaction just right and the 'background thoughts' hit the right note too. I love the relationship between Hathaway and Lewis and enjoyed how you brought it out in the story. Nice use of various sources, including Dante, though, coming from Leeds myself, not sure I like the idea of us being 'overthrown'! Will now have to go look that up on the internet. Thank again.

Lovely story! It was an interesting and very original idea and your writing sytle adds to the story. You have a certain way of describing things in such a sohisticated way, but in few words. I've read other stories of yours [not sure if i've reviewed. I'm often too lazy to sign in. my user name is MaybeTomorrowI'llFly] and have been highly entertained as well as impressed. Very good job and I really hope you'll continue to write for Lewis. It's such an underrated fandom... [says the author who hasn't written a Lewis story yet.]