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   aishachase97 3/19/13 . chapter 8lol |
| aishachase97 3/19/13 . chapter 7 ...Ok then... LMFAO! |
| aishachase97 3/14/13 . chapter 6 LMFAO |
| aishachase97 1/16/13 . chapter 5 LMFAO |
| ashachase97 11/23/12 . chapter 4 WTF... I can't breathe... |
| aishachase97 11/4/12 . chapter 3 Holy crap! I think I just died laughing |
| XStrawberryDuckFeathersX 8/28/12 . chapter 1 Lol,this is crazy XD It's funny though. :) Maybe you could try organising these ideas to form a regular story? Here's an example for how it could start. 'It was a bright day in the One-Hundred Acre Wood...until Pooh was fell to the ground,his stuffing flowing from the wound.' Hope that's not,sorry! :) Right now, it looks a bit like a poem,actually! Maybe you could try and turn it into a poem where all the other lines rhyme or something similar? :) It's a cool story though :) |
| aishachase97 8/28/12 . chapter 1 Hahahaha! Great job! I'm laughing! |
