|Reviews for POOH GOT SHOT|
| aishachase97 3/19/13 . chapter 8
| aishachase97 3/19/13 . chapter 7
...Ok then... LMFAO!
| aishachase97 3/14/13 . chapter 6
| aishachase97 1/16/13 . chapter 5
| ashachase97 11/23/12 . chapter 4
WTF... I can't breathe...
| aishachase97 11/4/12 . chapter 3
Holy crap! I think I just died laughing
| XStrawberryDuckFeathersX 8/28/12 . chapter 1
Lol,this is crazy XD It's funny though. :) Maybe you could try organising these ideas to form a regular story?
Here's an example for how it could start. 'It was a bright day in the One-Hundred Acre Wood...until Pooh was fell to the ground,his stuffing flowing from the wound.' Hope that's not,sorry! :)
Right now, it looks a bit like a poem,actually! Maybe you could try and turn it into a poem where all the other lines rhyme or something similar? :)
It's a cool story though :)
| aishachase97 8/28/12 . chapter 1
Hahahaha! Great job! I'm laughing!