I ADORE this, are you ever going to finish it?

Hi Allison - I just stumbled across this story of yours, and wanted to tell you how much I appreciated it.
Your plotting and premise are excellent.
There was some awkwardness and misuse of words, but all in all, excellent work.
I know you wrote this some time ago, but I liked it.
I'm just off to check out your other pieces.

Cheers, AmanitaMuscaria

I'm sure by now you're not planning to continue this, but I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed it and really would love to see a conclusion (even though I know it can only end in tears). I'll admit that when I first realized it was turning into a Sevvy + child fic I nearly stopped reading, as many of those are often grating to say the least, but you did a really wonderful job.

I really hope you finish this! I want to know if Severus gets Charity back from the Dark Lord. This is really well written.

Hellu!
I've been reading your story, for some time now, and notised it didn't had an ending, and wondered if you are going to continue or not. Because it's a really good story. Just want to know.

I must say, this is fantastic. I absolutely love how you depict the characters, never letting them stray too far from their original personalities, but adding an amazing amount of depth at the same time. I never thought I'd get so immersed in a story that involved the previous generation, that being Harry's parents and such...but you've done a splendid job! well done!
I hope you review soon, that's quite a cliffhanger... : )
nabenabe

gawd that's good. I liked it very much. I can't wait for the next update!

Another brilliant chapter! I love the entire story, definitely one of my favorites. Funny enough, I was just writing on an Occlumency lesson Snape-Dumbledore (for my fic "Shedding One's Soul, will be up soon) yesterday morning, and then found the chapter alert in my mailbox with your version. Yours is definitely much more dramatic, as is your whole story. Please update soon!

Oh super chapter! I'm so glad you're continuing this! And I hope you're working on original fiction. You're a very gifted writer.

This is a fantastic story, some of the best Snape angst I have ever read! Please tell me that you're gonna write more. You must finish it!

Ah! don't stop writing!! please continue!

**! YOU CAN'T ** END IT THERE! YOU CAN'T, YOU can't you can't...

Oh I've been wondering when you'd continue. GREAT chapter...Poor poor Severus, Charity and Charity...

I was just wondering if you were planning to continue this story. I hope so, as I do enjoy it.

Another super chapter, sorry it took so long to get a review in.