Oh, so close, but so far away! Don't you just hate it when little brothers ruin the moment where you're about to kiss the wierd german girl who you snuck into your house? :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

Very good.
I hope to see Erirk in the next chapter.
I look really forward to read the next chapter.

Excellent chapter.
I really like Hanna when she broke the window and her date with Feliciano.
I had liked this scene in the movie and I like her in your fic.
I like Feliciano, he is not a bad boy.

Good chapter.
I like when Sophie said :"mad germain" at Hanna.
I like the second part of the chapter with Marissa like teacher.

Very good.
I like the pairing Sophie/Hanna and I like the beginning of this fic, especially when sophie said at Hanna that she is a lesbo stalker.
Sophie and Hanna are very in characters and also Sophie's parents.

Howdy!

YES! It's back! And happy as you can tell. Touching and sweet while not being sappy. While a bit AU you capture Hanna's shy personality and Sophie's blunt sincerity beautifully yet again. Good job!
And what a moment with the almost-kiss and showing the timid intimacy with the touching of and with each other's legs and feet. Romantic, innocent and yet almost heated. You've a talent for this.

The Cracker!

That's an interesting AU idea for Hanna!
Please keep it up.

I like this.

Great chapter, I loved that part from the movie, it's definitely one of my favourite scenes. I really like that you don't just retell events from the movie verbatim, but rather add your own unique twist to it, which makes for a very compelling read. I wonder though, will Erik actually appear in this story at a later date, or is he just going to be mentioned? It would be very interesting to see Erik Heller trying to live a 'normal' life. This story keeps getting better, well done, I look forward to future updates. :)

I signed in so I could favorite/follow this amazing story. This chapter was great, also extremely funny, especially the part with Hanna and Marissa (laughed so hard I almost dropped my laptop!). I can hardly wait for the next update, please keep going, well done! :)

I've never had the honor of being the first to review a story before, awesome, I absolutely love this story already and I think you should definitely continue. I really like how you've incorporated scenes and dialogue from the movie in a way that's totally seamless and believable within the AU world of your story, which makes this a blast to read. I also think you truly captured the essence of the characters personalities here, especially Hanna and Sophie, so well done on that front. Great work all around, please keep it up because the world definitely needs more Hanna fanfiction! :)