Keep it going! Love it!

Wow. Just reading these five chapters in a row has got me absolutely hooked. At first I just wanted to read this because all the children wouldn't have to die in the future... But now I honestly want Arthur to succeed in helping Jennet because I honestly like her. I want her to have a better life than before and... ASDFJKL.
I love the character put into Jennet. She is a beautiful person and she still makes sense to what happened in the original story so... You go. Keep writing this because I am dying its so good!

Thank you, this is pretty much exactly what I was looking for. I think that Arthur and your past-Jennet would make a good couple, that's the only thing that might make this fic even more perfect than it already is, for me. Will be watching for updates.

A very good chapter. I wonder if employment will solve and prevent the ails of Jennet. I sincerely hope. Is that the end? Hum if it is it leaves too much room for me to imagine an after story.

Ah, this is exactly what I needed to brighten my day! Another superb chapter and well worth the wait.

this is AWESOME

This is a rather good story. They act true to their characters and I am fond of the way you have written Jennet.

I am excited for the next chapter.

BEAUTIFUL i love it keep going

Once again, Luly..a WONDERFUL chapter! You keep making this more and more interesting. I'm really wondering though, how Jennet will take the information Arthur has to give her. I mean, what would you do if someone told you that your child would die, you'd go insane, kill yourself, then go off and kill a bunch of children? Jennet would think of Arthur to be a madman, it would be hilarious actually.

Oh and, I like how you put a Jane Eyre cameo in this..I've never read that book, but eventually I will! Thanks..and keep updating! Merry Christmas, late. I hope you had a good one! :)

I wa really excited to see that you had updated, and you certainly did not disappoint. I'm kind of hoping that Artur will end up telling Jennet her fate, but that probably won't happen. As to Arthur's age, I think you're right with it.

I look forward to more!

im begging u make a new chapter

Amazing. I absolutely fell in love with your fic as soon as I read it; at first, I was hesitant to read it, because I thought it would be hard to successfully pull off something like this. But you did it perfectly, and with flare, and didn't sacrifice the characterisation for the sake of the plot. It is absolutely incredible and a joy to read, and I can't wait for more!
I especially like how other fics try to make Jennet totally innocent and sweet before she lost Nathaniel, but you have made her believable, and still so easy to love despite the fact she is very grumpy. Awesome! And don't worry, this chapter was great. (;

xx

continue its really good :)

She's cray-cray! I liked the part with Sam, he and Arthur had such an awesome bromance and I liked that you incorporated that into your fanfiction. Aberforth and Harry! The part about Stella was really sad too, such a shame she died, but hey! Maybe now Arthur can get his son back! You should of named the father Tom Riddle though, heheh.
:)

It's so sad! He was her one shot at being pure and the he died! URGHH! THE FEELS! I liked the whole backstory on Jennet, I really wish the movie would of included one as good as yours. I liked that part about her saying that someone would drown in the marsh and him going pale. I can already tell that her and Arthur are gonna be super brosky.
:)