|Reviews for Apologizing|
| ilovebooks1111 12/7/12 . chapter 1
Nice one! I just LOVE jily fanfics!
| SereneMayhem 9/15/12 . chapter 1
This is really great :)
| sapphiques-and-angelfire 8/30/12 . chapter 1
this is so cute, keep up the awesomeness!
| RabbitBones 8/29/12 . chapter 1
I really loved this.
The fire hair was a fantastic simile.
| ohprongs 8/29/12 . chapter 1
This gave me chills. Seriously I love your writing.
Just a couple of little points - a missing capital and speech mark where the only errors I spotted, and - I don't know if this is me being petty - I...in canon (Snape's Worst Memory), James can't even bring himself to say the word Mudblood ("I'd never call you a - you-know-what!") but here he says it twice. I'm not exactly sure of the time setting of your story but I don't think his beliefs would have changed that much. Just my two pennies worth.
| UOM1999 8/29/12 . chapter 1
There should be more reviews. I like your writing style and the plot of this story. The way its written, even though its amazing as a oneshot, almost makes me want more. Oh goodness, I'm becoming spoiled ;) But this really is fantastic.
| BlueSmartiesRule 8/29/12 . chapter 1
really dramatic and emotional but very good - enjoyed reading :)
| I'mJustMe-PlainOl'V 8/29/12 . chapter 1
| Xandua 8/29/12 . chapter 1
This is really sweet but also harsh and raw. It's so emotional. Great work!