That was the cutest thing I've ever read! The bold lines actually made me squeal

Ooh Elliot was soooo cute!
It was funny to read that Elliot called Oz a 'thing' the poor boy.

This is really cute, but topic jumpy in a sense. The moment when Elliot pushed Oz to the ground, then tried to offer his help where suddenly Gil shows up to ruin the nice moment was very jerky. It also leaves questions. Why was Alice rampaging? Who made her stop eating on the piano and who cleaned it up? And, even though this is the main pairing, you let the focus be too much on Oz and Elliot. Gilbert and Leo barely got any lines and Alice was just background noise in a way. You could use more interactions between the characters.

I hope this is taken as critique and not a flame. I like your work, it's cute and the pairing is less known and worked with. I want to help you better your work, not make you feel bad and as an effect make you stop.

I see that you did there with the bolded lines.

Short. Cute.
Love it!
Will there be more chapters? I mean... You just can't leave us with only this right?
I want to read more. This could be an awesome Fic.
Keep up the good work!

This is sad and cute and feelings! *flails* Okay, seriously, this is very cute and sad. Elliot has to force himself to not like Oz (poor boy, he's taken on an impossible mission), when he does (in this). I hope you do more like this!

Keep up the good work!