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aeva elementia 5/17/13 . chapter 2This was great. In-character, easily blends into canon- and with nicely done smut! Hee hee... I'm definitely looking forward to a continuation at some point. |
LOLx3 12/14/12 . chapter 2Ahhhh makes me ship them so hard. Totally canon material, too. |
Incidental Vegan Cannibal 9/27/12 . chapter 2Oh god that was amazing. It was so vanilla, but the details were all perfect and amazing. Definitely feeling a little flushed after that! It was perfect- hot, but without feeling like it was smut just for the sake of smut. |
Megamine 9/22/12 . chapter 2WOW! You are such an awesome writer! I This was soo sweet, and cute too. Tarrlok and Korra are written incredibly well. They're so endearing. This story is so unique, I haven't read anything like this before, and I LOVE it! No one could describe better the sort of lust that implied their relationship, you did it in a way that made mt brain blow for this awesome work! |
Noa32 9/15/12 . chapter 2Totally loved this. It's really hot, sexy, kinky and whatever other adjective you can come up with for good smut. I also really like how you write Tarrlok. He is intelligent and analytical but you manage write him as passionate and intense. His possibly love for Korra is written well. Korra was perfect too. Kudos to you for that ! You writing style reads smoothly and all in all this is a very great and fantastic fic. |
MargretEverdeen 9/10/12 . chapter 2LOVE LOVE LOVE! You should really add on to this story! |
Agas Spenjahgra VII 9/5/12 . chapter 1*drool* Me wants more. Moooooooooorrreeee... |
Corea 8/30/12 . chapter 1I loved this so much! I hope you do make this into a chapter fic because it was amazing. I'm usually just a tahnorra shipper so it was by chance that I saw this fic on my Timblr dash and I have a soft spot for Tarrlok so read it, and I'm so glad I did! |
Guest 8/29/12 . chapter 1 Love this! Your descriptions are well written and I like the plotline (interesting taskforce Korrlok). Can't wait for more. |
aa826 8/29/12 . chapter 1This is a really great start. It's very well written with a good amount of detail. I love how you described what the trip of them were feeling. I also love that they didn't jump right into doing it. I hope this is going to be a chapter fic because I really want to read more :) |
Jenlol1 8/29/12 . chapter 1Aghhhh this is... GREAT I love it can't wait for more |