The plot thickens, I can not wait for an update!

excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you

excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you

This chapter was interesting. I'm glad that Frances has found herself again.

ZI wonder what the last part meant.

Wow! Edward really is different from his father, all right...I wonder what man he has in mind? I'll bet it's Barnaby...too bad modern day infertility treatments weren't available back then. Couldn't they just adopt a child from an orphanage and raise it as their own and make it the heir to the throne? Perhaps one with royal blood from way back or something...

excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you

Great chapter, didn't expect Edward to say that

Poor Edward and Jane! I hope they are eventually able to conceive a child together...

Hurray for Edward! I'm so glad he's going to stand by Jane even if she does continue to be infertile...I hope that Mary and Thomas Keyes are able to marry as well...

excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you

excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you

I'm very interested to see how Barnaby, Strokes and Anne-Marie's plotting comes to fruition or failure which ever may come. I prefer it to be successful.

I think it would be something John would do, knowing that his son, Guilford was marrried to Edward's heir.

I like the ideao Kat becoming a dutchess in her own right.

I really felt for Edward VI and Lady Jane Grey and I never thought about shipping them until I saw a tumblr post on a tudors confession blog. I really like the concept and idea of the story. Opens a lot of opportunities for the characters to develop, which I think you've done really well.

I am glad that Adrian was scleared of all charges.

LOVE how Jane had a conversation with Gardiner and how her conversation with the stranger helped her immensely.

I also LOVE the part where Elizabeth and Mary are talking.

Hurray Jane and Edward are married!

""I've long admired you, Princess Mary. I remember, when I was eight, I came across a portrait of your mother. I thought she was one of the most beautiful women I'd ever seen. When you came to your brother's coronation, to be honest, I was terrified. I was sure a ghost had come. Do you remember how Elizabeth accidentally pricked your finger with a needle when you were helping her with her sewing? That wasn't an accident, my lady. She got tired of me hiding under tables and behind curtains when you were near."

Mary laughs. "I don't remember the sewing incident, but I do remember you paling and diving under dressers and beds whenever I came to talk to Edward."

As the dance ends, he escorts her back to her seat. "While I'm in France, may I write to you, my lady?"" This is rather cool.

""You might soon have a wife yourself, Tommy. She's almost at a marrying age, and she's got no cause to hold your unusual size and shape against you."

"No," Thomas says, a bit sadly. "If perhaps, her sister weren't Queen, I might see if she'd allow me to court her. As it is, if she ever marries, it'll be someone worthy of her noble blood and high-ranking station."

They finish up, and the groom says, "Lady Mary's a sweet girl, and nothing can be said against her character. But no matter how royal her blood and how high her family is, it doesn't change the fact she's a simple, deformed girl. Her sisters and mother should be happy any decent man with the means of providing for her would show an interest."

"I thank you for your kindness," Thomas says. "Goodnight, my friend."" Thomas has a good friend in that man.

How did Francis end up in the body of water? maybe the Duke of Northumberland did it, because Adrain was cleared from killing Guildford.
I'm very glad that Thomas saved her and Jane should be too.

What a wonderful chapter! I love the twist at the end, and the last scene between Elizabeth and Mary made me terribly sad-Elizabeth is very lonely, isn't she? And I absolutely adored the bit between Mary and Fitzpatrick. Can I sense a relationship coming with them? Please update soon! I can't wait to read more. :)