|Reviews for Dark pleasures|
| mcamastow 5/3/13 . chapter 6
you hae to try to staywith the way that Christine deals
With itand all the otherladiesfinding waysto distract her'.
| Princessoffun 10/30/12 . chapter 2
I like where this is going. Although if I may suggest writing more. There's too much going on in so little text.
| guest 8/31/12 . chapter 2
I like where your story is going and I will happily keep reading. I do suggest that you have someone proofread before you post. Simple things like capitalizing the first letter of a name and adding commas correctly can make a world of difference. It is easy to forget that there is a difference between "to" and "too". Also, when a new character speaks you should create a new paragraph for them.
Thanks for sharing your work.