So far, I'm intrigued by this story. It's always good to see a fresh new take on the Sonic universe! I thought Sonic's sentence "Trying to ruin the happiness of the reason he was ruined" rather odd, but everything else is spot on.

CREAM! Why couldn't Sonic Chaos Control you there if time was of the essence?

14?!

Words cannot describe just how much of a pleasure this story was to read. An engaging plot, one with plenty of twists and surprises to surprise the readers; excellent portrayal of the character's personalities, true to their Canon versions; proper forethought and planning for the story's progression; all this and more makes this one of the most entertaining stories I've ever read on this website.

You know what else? I'm actually feeling a little saddened and emphatic right now. Believe me when I say that something like that rarely happens when I'm reading a story. But in this case, I was easily able to pity Sonic and all his friends for their sufferings. As much as it pains my heart everytime I read a story where Shadow is the only one of the original cast to have surivived (and is thus all alone), I felt even sympathetic towards Sonic in this story. The way I see it, Shadow got off easy, as he did not have to go through the horrid ordeal of literally seeing his whole world come to an end. Sonic, on the other hand...

Though the ending left many an issue unresolved, it nevertheless felt like a suitable conclusion to me. It's also a little sadistic, as you leave the readers wondering whether or not Silver and Co. will manage to save the future. But then again, I believe sadism like that is required of an author. After all, that's why we use cliffhangers, don't we?

Keep writing magnificent pieces of work such this, Tzarina. I hope to one day enjoy another one of your stories like I did "The M War".

- Ulkira

P.S: Also, that is an awesome book cover, indeed.

Quite a few unexpected things. Never would've guessed them to go out like that! Looking forward to the rest of this, as it seems to be really starting to pick up. Fantastic!

What is there to say I haven't already said? This is amazing! I tear up in almost every chapter, incredible and bittersweet, you're an amazing and powerful writer.

So deep, it's amazing. Incredible. It's definitely taken an interesting turn now, cant wait to see how it plays out. Oh, and I meant to see this on the last review, the mosquito thing was really creative, I've never thought about it before. Brilliant.

I started tearing up when Sonic came to Tails house with Knuckles. That entire scene was really nice. The end of Sonic's dream made me jump a good bit! I'm kind of starting to feel bad for these aliens. And now I'm stuck on a cliffhanger! This story is brilliant! I absolutely love it! Farewell!

Another excellent chapter! My favorite part was when he gave different meanings to all the Chaos Emeralds, it was brilliant. Keep it up!

Excellent story. My only suggestion would be to use something to seperate the scenes, like an extra line or some kind of symbol/marker. Right now it's hard to tell when you're changing scenes. Other than that, its a fantastic story!

This is a very captivating story! One chapter out and I'm already absorbed in it! *applause* very excellent. Grammar/spelling/punctuation/stuff wise I didn't see any mistakes. Update soon! Farewell!