|Reviews for Lillian|
| Kurokarin 12/4/12 . chapter 6
Haha Hello. i liked it. constantly being pushed off buildings and outta windows )
| ShahbanouScheherazade 11/30/12 . chapter 1
I very much enjoyed reading this chapter! You have a very well-developed style for someone writing their first fanfic!
The beginning was very strong, and put me straight into the story. I really liked the way you presented Lillian's situation!
You have room in this chapter to expand your descriptions, and I think you should. Your descriptions are quite graceful, and adding more to them will further enhance the reader's feeling of going "with" Lillian on this journey.
I'm looking forward to see where you go with this! I may send some further thoughts/feedback via PM.
| just a girl 10/30/12 . chapter 5
it was sooo lovely of you to dedicate a chapter to me!
and now on to the main part of this review. i quite enjoy were you're going with this story. and i hope some of my guesses which i made in my head are right ;) but we'll see... :D
but maybe you could try to make the chapters longer...?
| just a girl 10/13/12 . chapter 3
i hope you'll continue this story. i would like to read more :)
don't get yourself discouraged by the lack of reviews! write this story for yourself (&maybe for me ;))
greetings from a german
| Kurokarin 10/1/12 . chapter 3
Will it really, dear? I liked it!