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| Reviews for Picture Perfect |
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   Yesterday's Secrets 6/14/13 . chapter 17Honestly this is the first time that I've read a fanfic that centers around the relationship between Tomoyo and Eriol so it's quite a nice change for me not to mention a nice break from the thousands of SyaoSaku fanfics out there. Anyway, overall I'd give this story a 8/10 because while it is an entertaining read, it's so fast-paced that I couldn't feel the in-depth emotions of the main characters. Especially at the last chapter. Judging from the numerous stories of yours that I had read before this, you are definitely capable of humor but I didn't quite catch that sense of yours in PP. Nonetheless, the plot really is quite great and your writing skills are okay. I never would've guessed the twists and turns that you manipulated here lol. This story has so much potential if it wasn't for the quick pace on which I obviously don't particularly like. Also, you can do much better than carelessly drop bombs (that didn't quite explode the way that you must've wanted it to) on the last chapter. That's all. Keep on writing! Cheers, Yesterday's Secrets |
| watermelon17 8/7/12 . chapter 17 "God thank the miracle of love." I like that line! Tomoyo and Eriol are so meant for each other! I love this fic! |
| Tommy-yomz 4/12/11 . chapter 17 Aww, what a great story. |
| Amytis-Chan 12/23/07 . chapter 17 so sweet! I luv miracles! |
| whitewave16 12/13/07 . chapter 13 The Marriage Booth bit was fun! Sweet and romantic in its own way-so fitting that Yamazaki was the "pastor". It's good that Sakura masterminded it all. Can't wait for the pageant. |
| whitewave16 12/13/07 . chapter 12 I also enjoyed the dialogues between Suppi and Nakuru! So funny! |
| whitewave16 12/13/07 . chapter 9 I like the lively exchanges between Eriol and Tomoyo-they don't miss a beat. |
| whitewave16 12/12/07 . chapter 7 Hey nice twist! A hold up! Hahaha |
| whitewave16 12/12/07 . chapter 3 Kaho's arrival ought to spice up things. This is one of my favorite E&T fanfics. |
| whitewave16 12/12/07 . chapter 1 The naming scheme you did for the chapters is cute-matches with the title of the fanfic. Cool! |
| whitewave16 12/12/07 . chapter 2 I'm a sucker for E&T! Love this. |
| chikay 10/14/07 . chapter 17 so sweet! so cute! kala ko sad ending eh... bwahaha.. i'm so glad na cla ung nagkatuluyan! galing mo idol! :D |
| Green Animelover 4/22/06 . chapter 17 it was really cute... i enjoyed reading it...but then again who wouldnt?:) |
| Trickmaster-lilica 4/10/06 . chapter 17 I love your story! |
| Kerube-Chan 10/22/05 . chapter 17 Hi! Such a wonderful story. To be honest I cried in the last part. Great Work. Congratulations. BYE U Good Luck. |
