|Reviews for I Won't Return|
| YellowDizzyLombax 5/19/13 . chapter 5
That was unexpected. I need to find out what's happened to the poor Lombax DX
| bryan mccloud 5/15/13 . chapter 4
nice filler chapter..._.
i should say the guards should be the one strapping down ratchet to a wooden bed not robots...lol.
ratchet can never dismantle the guards...hahahahaha.
| YellowDizzyLombax 5/14/13 . chapter 4
Whoa, I wonder what's gonna happen next :D
| ngrey651 5/14/13 . chapter 4
This...is...RIDICULOUS! They're RATCHET AND CLANK, not freakin' DR. NEFARIOUS AND LAWRENCE! They've saved the world eighteen times over! Furthermore, they didn't have ANY alibis for these murders or ANY rebuttal witnesses or ANYTHING like that?! This is STUPID! This makes no SENSE! There's no logical reason ANYBODY would believe these people over THE HEROES WHO SAVED THE GALAXY THREE TIMES OVER! What POSSIBLE reason could you have for expecting us to believe that ANYBODY would think that guy is...this can't HAPPEN! It makes no SENSE! IT MAKES! NO! SEEEEENSE!
| Reyaumbra 2/24/13 . chapter 3
In what way do you need help?
As in like a beta, or legal advice?
(I like the chapter by the way, and it doesn't matter if they're short ))
| Reyaumbra 10/10/12 . chapter 1
Holy Jepoleys, this is great :O
Please update soon ;)
All the characters are in character (which is hard, lol)
...and this is a great idea. I look forward to seeing what happens next...
| bryan mccloud 9/1/12 . chapter 1
how about adding in a few star fox characters in your story especially marcus mccloud and his newly form star fox team who is looking for some more members to join his team...
| RobotAuction 9/1/12 . chapter 1
(: I liked it! 8D NICE WORK !