AWESOME! Really luv this story and plz update soon! Thanks

Hey we totally loved this story! Please continue it before Ty dies from lack of pacience (she is kinda like sasori in that matter D:) so please update like NOW (plz?) -echoes into cave where we have Deidara and sasori tied up :3 -

AMAZING! just luv the way u described everything *.* u hav a talent to write stories xDDD

...and to think something like this could be really happenin' to someone...how an someone even think of the situation like this...poor dei :'(

OWMIGOD! It's awesome so far you amazing Canadian! (LOL XD) And I like long chapters! I prefer thing without too many chapters and with longer chappies so I WORSHIP YOU!

naaaaaaaw it's awesome but i hate dei's dad he's a bastard i think he's a god damn baka i will drag him down to hell with me and torture him for all eternity for i am satain A!

I just have to say I love this story! Although I feel bad for poor Deidara... Please please update soon!

poor Dei :(

One word: A.M.A.Z.I.N.G

Sweet! Ack this is so !? Ahhh this is wonderful almost wordless and my emotions are every where. Great job!

Best couple Eva! Love the stories

homg homg homg you gotta continue i'w gust DIE witouwt next paegs

D: I love it, its amazing, DDDDDD: this is why i don't read unfinished stories, they break my heart. This is the first unfinished story I've ever read, and its perfect. :DDDDDDDD

Deidara's dad is a dick -_- he shouldn't have lied either DX XD

Sorry it took a while to read, I've been busy with school and all _"

I think you should review only when you can :) don't push yourself!

I'm hooked, i don't usually read incomplete stories but it called to me , its going to be like a hard-to-be-rid-of ex boyfriend, i will always go back to it.