Wonderful screenplay! I thought Brad's friend came off a little too racist, but it fit kind of with what he was going through. Welcome to the fandom! It's good to have another writer around.

There are some real genuine Alan/Denny moments in here. Nice to see. Glad to see another person writing in this fandom. Sorry it didn't work out the way you wanted it to!
Have a read of others, this is a friendly group!