This is a pretty entertaining story that i had the joy of reading!
first of all i'd like to say that i was pretty disappointed that u killed rinoa off but it IS better than torture or something so its pretty ok.Secondly i thought it ran a litle long i almost skiped some of it.{this is just constructive critisism im getting to good stuf} but despite all that i loved Zoe she's so cute! ^.^ and liked the twists in it too and Faith.
to finish up i really likd it and i really want 2 read the seqel! =3 {p.s. sory bout the form of it i suk at revws}

Yay! Happy happy ending! Looking forward to the sequel!

And oh my... Gothic creep, scary b*h. XD

Yay! They kissed! Finally! Now all that's left is for Zoe and Faith to die... Nyeheheheheh!

i loved THE Moment where Squall and Quistis were suspended in the air, all Matrix-like, and yet somehow very, very fantasy-romantic-like.

And then that biatch had to drop them. Never liked girls with the name Faith (RE: BTVS).

And as for why Faith and Zoe remained unhurt... I'm sure you have your reason as the writer, but my personal take is because they are POCs (Perfect Original Characters), AKA Mary Sues.

Sorry about the ragging... I love this story, really I do, but Mary Sues bug the #^$^%*@ outta me.

Dude, I really like this story... but if those Mary Sues don't start dying, or at least stop popping up everywhere, I'm gonna... scream for Mom. Yeah, that's right. Now are you scared? XD

Kids do the darndest things! Like interrupting romantic Moments. *grumble*

Nice start. I like the story lots... but I can't believe Quistis would just sleep with a jerk like Seifer just because Squall got married. Quistis ain't no **! *sobs* But yeah, plot device, so okay, I'll deal with it. :)

Yay, update soon

You HAVE to continue!!!! This is a great story! I'm usually a fan of Seiftii, but I read Qualls when they're good and yours is! ;-) ~*Megs*~

So far so good:)

This is good please continue

Very nice.Keep it up:)