Wow.

Beautiful.

Favorite quote:

"(Tell me, Harry, did it speak to you,

that fluttering gold thing, clutched in desperate fingers,

tell me did you ever want to let it free?)"

Good usage of parentheses. Good flow. Good characterization. Wonderfully poetic... I'm not a sap... at all... *runs off to blow nose*

oh... very good. But why is it yr in the end?

Oh my god! That is so good! It's so sad. I'm crying, here. A completely new take on Draco. I love it.

Very well put. You should fix the 'yr' with 'your' and fix the odd capital and such. Other then that, excellent job. I love how you end it.

cool

a little sad though

::::i tried to fill you, Harry,

but still i find you empty,

because i've taken all i can of you.::::

Wow... i really like those lines! *nods approvingly* yep yep i really do! it has a nice flow to it even though it doesnt rhyme, which is good. i write poems myself... *preens* maybe you could read some of mine sometime? i would love to know what you think... one poetry writer to another...

oh and WHERE do you find glow in the dark harry potter bandaids? i want some!

ratty

oh.

oh oh oh oh oh.

Now I want to read all your other poetry, because if you can do this for Harry...well, no need to say more.

What a terribly good writer you are.

*rushes off to read all the other stuff you've published*

Wow... pretty. Reminds me of "In Dialogia" by Ivy Blossom and... someone else.

*sniff* that's so lovely. that's so so lovely.

I loved this poem. I had to read it over a few times to understand everything, but it was very clever. Keep on writing!