Really good :) do you think you could do more countXBertrand or countXmiss mcCauley? :)

You already know that I loved this. Very dramatic, very romantic, a devoted, heartbroken Bertrand and a commanding, possessive Grand High Vampire - how could I not? Also OCS! :D xo

Ah I remember reading this months before series 4 and feeling sad even back then. Guilty as charged for writing Bertrand as one of the evil guys but how desperately poignant does this seem in light of series 4 now. Fantastically written, well observed and as spookily accurate as ever. xo

Loved this. Great bit of mythology with one acting as the guide for the other until it becomes vice versa, the way Bertrand makes his decision which hints that he is already in love with his guardian angel to the philosophical questions posed by their feelings for one another. Great play on words re the power to snuff out the rays of the sun- really loved that. xo

Aw really sweet and yet full of despair. You captured the greyness and weariness of Bertrand's journey and I love the imagery of the tomb and its location. Lovely final words. xo

Ah you have the Count down perfectly! Those are exactly his mannerisms when Ingrid or Vlad are in trouble. Deliciously snarky and malicious- Count Dracula perfection! *grins manically* xo

ps Genuine CoL.

Awww I lke bertrand.

Only with Ingrid though. lol sorry Vlad

Aw, so cute!

*sniffle* This is lovely. 3

LOL if vampires could have a heart attack I'm sure Malik just had one. (Btw love how jealous the count got)

I am playing catch up with your writing and I just... blood, I just love this chapter, perhaps a bit more than any of the others.

Loved it! So like the Count to stir things up at the end there. The details about Malik not recognising the danger signs were brilliant- a lovely insight not only into the Count's mannerisms but also into the relationship between the pair of them x

Good I like the bit where he said, "whatever-whoever I like," it was funny

Ahhhh you write them so magnificently! The hints at Bertrand's loneliness and hidden vulnerability, the Count's anxiety and broken spirit over his son and the way they are both seeking comfort. Loving the Count's snarkiness - perfectly IC. xo

EEE! I love this!
They would be awesome together - can you imagine?
Love it love it lov it!