I want to cry too. thats so sad. I realy hope Kazuha becomes happy with this other guy, even he is not that perfekt for her.

This fanfiction is the first par aof many, right?

This is wonderful. You should continue. I can't wait 4 the next chap. .

This is definitely good. I love how you made the thought of Conan's situation as Heiji's fear so he won't come after Kazuha. But it's sad. I feel for these two detectives... Anyway, nice work! I made an inspiration for another story coz of this! Thank u! :)

I almost cried when Heiji cried. Seriously, this is so sad, but Heiji is an idiot. -..-

This is so good, yet so sad, ah it made me cry! :( Really good though.

j'ai trop aimé BUT IT SO SAAAAADD i_i

This kinda made me cry/ die on the inside. This is SO AWESOME! It great to see that for once, Fanfiction didn't end on a happy note (not that that is a bad thing.) YOU. ARE. AWESOME.
-Animevy116

Oh Heiji you idiot! :( :( :( Nice story, but he really is an idiot.

very nice story, how u explain what happen in the manga. this is really fit their ups and downs Heiji emotion for Kazuha. Really match their relationship. U make me feel Shinichi was so bad to hurt Ran. Heiji is so sweet and overprotective of -done

P.S the name is also my penname on ff :))

That was really sad,and it does need a happy sequel XD!pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

I love this story! Despite the sad ending...you know, you should make it into more than one chapter. But, it's probably best to keep at one. Man, I feel like crying...SOB! :"(

Heiji is so STUPID! How can he give up Kazuha using such a lame excuse as to protecting her from danger! She won't be happy without him!
sad story!

Wow, I have to say that this is a really beautiful take on the relationship between Heiji and Kazuha. C: I really love how you took the canon fact that Heiji is oblivious and attached a story to explain why exactly and how he isn't. It's really heartbreaking, especially at the end, but it is understandable why he'd do that to her and to him. ;-;

BUT yeah, it's really beautifully heartbreaking.

Who am I kidding, let me express my love for you and this fic: ahskjdhaskdsk aasdkjsdsd WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO ME. OW KOKORO HURTS REALLY BAD my feels , i can't. you just had to run over my feels a million times with this, aghasdnasd. -sobs grossly on the floor- Nonono aghsd. ow, feels. You just... ;_; oh that hurts like a mother.;;; But its so beautiful, what beautiful pain is this. -sobcreys;;-

You made me cry...*sob*
Besides making a few grammatical mistakes, I would say I like it because overall the flow was good and you have managed to portray a likeliness of what would it be like and makes it looks believable to the readers too. Good job!