|Reviews for Wisp POV Outtake|
| melissamary55 9/2/12 . chapter 1
love it and is so interesting to read wisp pov and hope you doit again update soon
| lala43 9/2/12 . chapter 1
I'm going to second one of your other reviewers: you always give me something to think about. I used to work in group homes. I wish I had this kind of cheat sheets into the minds of some of "my" girls. Reading their case files broke my heart, but I never had the level of sadness and empathy that Wisp inspires in me. I was so young working with these damaged souls (barely ten years older than my oldest charges). I wish the mother-of-two-me could go back and give my barely-out-of-college me some food for thought.
Anyways, Thank you.
| ohtobeyoung 9/2/12 . chapter 1
I'm devastated. Had no idea this was going on I loved this story.
| favludo 9/2/12 . chapter 1
This is so beautiful! I love that Wisp has language and I love that she thinks the way she does. I wish she could convey her confusion about sitting on furniture, it would be such a breakthrough for her to know it is okay to be off the floor. Your out-take is absolutely stunning! And such a lovely surprise to have this appear in my inbox. Thanks for writing and posting :)
| A green eyed girl 9/2/12 . chapter 1
THANKS FOR THIS OUTTAKE. WE WILL MISS YOU THOUGH (
| mysty1234 9/2/12 . chapter 1
Amazing as usual! I love how Wisp's adorableness has such an undercurrent of sadness. So cute but her life shouldnt have been the way its been. asklfjalskfjalksfj I cant wait till the hiatus is over. I'm forever in love with your Wisp and Edward.
| Teresa R 9/2/12 . chapter 1
Sorry about the crap you are going through but I think you should take it as a complement your story is great but a person should not take it as there own. I love her POV she is so inocent and in her dreams she knows there is more to her. Her dad was involved in what happened to her?
| Guest 9/2/12 . chapter 1
Hey keep up the good work , don't let idiots stop a great story ! You have a good idea and it is well written , you cannot compare that to something that appears to be written by a dyslexic 4 yr old non English speaker! ( no offence to dyslexics, 4 yr old or foreigners!)
| cbmorefie 9/2/12 . chapter 1
Nice outtake! Thanks!
| Guest 9/1/12 . chapter 1
Interesting that Wisp has words in her sleep. She wants to stay with Edward. Wisp realizes that Edward is good to her, that nothing bad would happen to her. I hope that you will finish this when everything is straightened out. I love this story and would like to see how you plan to continue with Wisp. Please continue!
| VictoriaJade87 9/1/12 . chapter 1
awesome outtake :) thanks :)
| alli62 9/1/12 . chapter 1
I am here to the end. Love this story. It's entirely different and beautiful and devastating as well. Looking forward to your next update, whenever that may be.
| Green and Hearts 9/1/12 . chapter 1
I LOVE Wisp's pov!
Its cute and sweet and oh so heart breaking.
I absolutely love the way you wrote her pov! It gives insight without totally pushing aside who she is. The way she sees things is so sweet and pure in a way. Its lovely the way she sees Edward, she admires and adores him, she looks up to him. And she has a great mother figure in Rose.
Im really sad that the plagiarism drama is messing with this story that I'm so in love with :(
But... i'll take what I can get. So ready for the rest!
| notthatamanda 9/1/12 . chapter 1
*sniffle* Oh dear. What a sweetheart. She deserves all the good things.
Hah, I'm close to ugly crying now. Her innocence is so bittersweet. I can't help but imagine the wicked witch of CPS (?) dressed as Jack Sparrow. :')
| cjrich 9/1/12 . chapter 1
Wonderful to read WPOV and see a little into her mind. Have missed you this week. Don't know about the 'drama', just know that this is by far the best story in FF and TWCS. Hopefully the drama will fade and you can let us back in to this wonderful fantasy that you have created. Will wait forever, but hope I don't have to...miss this story, miss your beautiful words and amazing characters. Please come back to us soon...and REALLY need to know who was at the door! Thank you - Cheri