What a great story! I wish I could've gotten the sims makin magic to work when I had it. Oh well. At least I've got the sims 3 supernatural now. _

Aw, I can't believe this story is over! You wrote it amazingly throughout. Great work!

This is my favourite chapter so far, I love it :)

Oooh loved it! Ha, ha, ha, ha, too funny the ending, funny and amazing! I can't wait for the next one. Sorry I will put mine up either late tonight or early morning. Just polishing up a few things so that’s why it’s taking a bit.

Wow that's a twist! Kind of a crazy twist but adds something new and I think Mortimer will disbelieve Bella that she is a witch.

Why didn't Bella listen! I wonder what the Grim Reaper is going to do? Another awesome chapter.

Great job! Omg, Simis is the reaper?!

Great chapter! This story is getting more and more interesting.

Awesome job! I can't wait to see what Cassandra is gonna get up to.

It doesn't matter that this chapter is short, it reveals some good but piece information, more about the Mystery Man, a short but sweet chapter.

Naughty Cassandra, not listening to Bella, oh well, can't stop wanting to read more!

Another awesome chapter. What a great shock it was.

Great chapter! I'm starting to annotate and it's not fun, lol. Keep it up!

I really can't wait for what is in store for Bella in Magic Town but another thing, I agree that Ms. Crumplebottom is a cranky pants. lol

Again a awesome chapter, who knew that Bella was taken to Magic Town and escape, Bella has always looked she had a secret who knew it would be magic.