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   Yuska Fudo 1/19/13 . chapter 4you should keep this going i like it |
| AcediaPrototype 11/20/12 . chapter 7 Didn't think it was that bad actually for a first fanfic. I've seen much worse actually. Keep up the writing mate! ;) |
| Misaka 20.001 11/12/12 . chapter 7 wait, i read it two time and doesn't understand what is their job. for style, well, its up to you. i just merely a reader :3 keep writing |
| Mach68 11/10/12 . chapter 1 That's it Impostor Pocky. You have been reported for harassing Kaijeno. Hopefully you lose access to your account. |
| My Chemical Burn 11/10/12 . chapter 6 STUPID AUTHOR STUPID FIC |
| My Chemical Burn 11/10/12 . chapter 5 ATTENTION! ANYONE PLEASE DON'T READ THIS! |
| My Chemical Burn 11/10/12 . chapter 4 Total shitfic... |
| My Chemical Burn 11/10/12 . chapter 3 You lack any writing skill whatsoever |
| My Chemical Burn 11/10/12 . chapter 2 JAYSUS H. CHRIST that was awful as all hell! |
| My Chemical Burn 11/10/12 . chapter 1 Total bullshit! i oughta castrate you so you cant infect the world with your incompetensy |
| Misaka 20.001 10/31/12 . chapter 1 the naration doesnt develope better. Thats all. Keep writing kay! |
| Misaka 20.001 10/6/12 . chapter 5 hi again, and please dont angry with my harsh comment, okay.. the hougo is like one in Yuuji body right? or it is have another mechanism? i'm so sad because you lack of creativity to found another reason why Rose doesnt dissappear. oh...as usual, you need naration. explain us about the situation around her/him, what he/she felt not just what in their mind. oh...and a fuckin description should do. instead descrption outside story, describe how rose or Ru inside story will make it not boring. you have potential story, but honestly lack creativity and writing styles. sorry, it so harsh. ._. Ganbatte! |
| Fire lord 626 10/6/12 . chapter 5 nice chapter |
| Fire lord 626 9/22/12 . chapter 4 not bad, looking forward to the next one |
| Misaka 20.001 9/22/12 . chapter 4 it seems you need more naration than dialog. or is it your style? hum...interesting, and now i wait continuation, i'm already list it in my favorite :# anyway, i hope you will read my character set and enter in your story even as cameo Shiori Kamisaka Age 15 Type Torch - Flame Haze grown as Flame Haze riased by her father. Title: The Dual Sin Wielder Appearance : Outside Fuzestu : a short statured girl, pettan ad her hair reach her back. black hair, green left eye, black right eye. Inside Fuzestu: his Hair change into Cyan and can form a wing, her right eye turn into cyan and with that change, Shiori can look at what happen in ten untill thirty second to the future Personality: raised as Flame Haze and ordinary school girl at the sometime make her have dual personality. the normal one is sweet and gentle while the second is coldblooded and cruel. both of perconality can make a conversation and if other people look or hear her it will be like a crazy girl talking to herself. Weapon: two Katana and ability to look at future Food: strawberry shortcake Likes : anything with strawberry Hates: a Guze no Tomogara, a people who have big ego and a people who stole her strawberry from her shortcake. Dislikes: stalker. Goal: to eat many kind of food with strawberry and defeat Hecate. Contractor : Cecilicyan the Flame Restrainer Personality, so carefree but interesting in so many knowledge. have ability to observ and find a weakness. her form is restrained in CYan Colored Ribbon that Shiori use have a nice writing . |
