Oh my gosh, the part where Jesse was holding Holly. Awww! Just, awww...right in the feels. 3 Yet another scene I want to draw, if you'll allow. :)
And holy crap, Saul Goodman is dead. :O Sh- just got real.
I don't completely understand what's going on, though. Does this follow a Season 5 episode? I've only seen through Season 4 because that's all Netflix has up. Or is it just a generic "Walter is missing and the cartel is coming" setup?
Either way, it's really in-character. Skyler and Jesse's conversation feels very genuine. I loved "Actually, *I* was the one who knocked." Nice how he didn't mention "But Walt made me do it," because that would have freaked Skyler out even more. This feels so in the spirit of the show that I could really see this being included in the lead up to the finale of Season 5.2.
Can't believe this is the end of this story, though. What a cliffhanger. :O

Interesting story. I'm not sure if it is believable, but I liked it.

Great job! Do another chapter.