Nice chapter. Great detail! Keep writing and posting, I think this is really awesome!

Not bad if this your first attempt at writting a story. I felt whilst reading, that the Darren Shan Saga has been completed yet; as a couple of things don't make sense.

There were hundreds of mistakes, mostly puntuation errors and mispelt words. The storyline is 50/50. It sounds as though you had a lot of ideas on what to write and you got a bit carried away and put everything into the story. Your characters didn't give me the same feeling as the characters I read about in the books. I like to be introduced to new characters. One moment Sara was a little girl and the next moment she says something and she's instantly a warewolf.

I liked the way you brought in a new species. It added a new twist and turn to the storyline. I did feel a strong urge to find out why Evangeline was so familair to Darren, which was one of the resons I wanted to keep reading. The other reason was because apart from the story having lots of problems it was still an unfinshed piece of the Darren Shan Saga that kept me wanting more.

Great chapter! Thanks for finally updating. I was afraid you had given up on writing this story. Keep writing and posting I think you are doing a great job!

Nice attention to detail! I love your writing style. Keep writing and posting you are doing a great job!

Thanks for the awesome quick update! Mr. Tiny want a wonderful addition to add into the mix of mayhem, he really adds tension that no other character can really do. I bet the wolf with Mr. Tiny is Angeline's cousin. Also, I'm curious as to what type of vampire bloodheart is? I really enjoy your writing style, Rockchic6, its fluid and well structured. Keep writing and posting, this is great stuff!

Such a great story! What a neat idea to put werewolves into the mix. It works rather well, after all if vampires exist why not other creatures of legend and fantasy. I'm really surprised that it only has a few reviews. Keep writing and posting, please! I'm excited to see how this plays out.

Good cliffhanger...
Please please update soon...

I love this story! It think it was really cleaver to add werewolves into the mix. Keep posting! I'll be watching for updates.

I LIKE this a lot! Such a fun twist on including werewolves into the mix. It's sad you only have a few reviews when this story is great and is written well. Update ASAP! I'll be following.

This story is quite interesting and is turning out really well. I enjoy reading your writing style, its fluid and has great structure. Great Job! Keep writing and posting! I'd love to read more of this. _

Wwwhhhhyyyyy is Kurda here...?
Kurda is mine you can't do anything to him

Yes! This is so good, really interesting! There are a few mistakes, but those can be overlooked, unless you want a Beta. Also, I take it Gavner's still alive?

Oh, Darren. Poor Darren XD

Update soon please please please!