|Reviews for The Black Sheep|
| Nintendoman01 4/20/13 . chapter 1
| Anon 3/27/13 . chapter 2
Please continue to update this story! It has SO MUCH potential! I just finished the game and fell in love with it :D
| Guest 3/27/13 . chapter 2
Please continue to u
| Pitbull Almighty 10/7/12 . chapter 2
I love the fact that you dislike Megan. I also dislike her.
Keep up the excellent work
| Strawberry Sherlock 10/1/12 . chapter 2
This story is amaaazing. Please continue!
| Guest 9/29/12 . chapter 2
The story is coming along nicely. I cant wait to read more.
| GeeDeeny 9/14/12 . chapter 2
More please! I really like your style of writing, especially speech. It comes across so natural. :)
| BlackxValentine 9/11/12 . chapter 2
I don't like Megan either, but I am loving this story and even though I'm a fan of Adam/Malik; Elizabeth is a really cool girl so far, she's very cute. I can't wait to see how this whole 'babysitting' assignment goes. :)
| Ghosthic Satane 9/11/12 . chapter 2
Good chapter, maybe it's because there's more explanation and description than in the first but i find it better structured and less confusing. Nice work. :)
| LoveandScience 9/11/12 . chapter 2
Yay, another chapter! Poor Elizabeth, being used like Jensen was. Looking forward to more! :)
| aonymousXXX 9/7/12 . chapter 1
So far, so good. I'm interested to see how you make this whole shtick work out ! A criticism would be in order. 1. You didn't give much background to the aftermath of the whole moral dilemma in the Human Revolution world. How did it go ? What message was shown to the world to see ? 2. Add more detail to newcomers like the Elizabeth gal. Done for now. I hope to see what happens next ! Update soon !
| ultra91 9/6/12 . chapter 1
Ultra commands you to continue the story puny mortal.
| Ghosthic Satane 9/3/12 . chapter 1
Seems interesting eventhough there are some part a bit too fast (where does Taggart comes ? And why him, opposant to Sarif, and not Hugh Darrow who was David Sarif's friend and mentor among other things) and a few thing that seem "unrealistic" : distance between Detroit and Singapour is 9380.95 Miles 15096.76 Km which means several HOURS for an one way flight so for a way and back refill the VTOL you can guess how long it would be. Locating phone call is nothing new today so why should it be to Pritchard ? Finally, what does Elizabeth's augmentations have to do with her competencies to work as secretary appart nothing ? ;)
Don't take it wrong, i like your plot but there are things that have me gritting my teeth. And a few explanation in the summary are not enough to explain gapes. You may want to developp a bit more instead of jumping ahead (we're not in your head knowing all the details. ;)
Wish you courage to continue this story. :)
| LoveandScience 9/2/12 . chapter 1
Hey, I really like this so far. I think it could get really interesting.
Only thing, you might remove the "Paste your document here..." at the end of the chapter.
Looking forward to more! :)