Very cute story:D poor Jim:(
hehe

I enjoyed every bit of this story. It almost reminded me of the email going around a while back where the man bought a taser for his wife, and tried it out on himself to make certain it worked. This was a real hoot. Thanks!

Not a good day for Jim.

LOL! :) I can see Jim hiding his hurt hand from Artie,I can even see him tring to hide the whole big mess! I like this story,its different and you did a good job with it.

I enjoy your stories, but I'd like to suggest you have someone beta them. I noticed several typos, along with a problem of shifting between past tense and present tense, which tends to take me out of the story.

Keep writing though! I hope to see more of your stories.