Don't worry about it's shortness;it's always the gesture that matters. After all,I often view short chapters in new updates as a prolougue to rather-long ones. I really love whenthese two are up to something sensual. Like I said before,I always love to read Ben/Nellie stories and try to imagine what Ben was feeling for that girl,before he was really drulling over ''his'' dear Lucy and his transformation into Sweeney Todd. I also hope that more people will follow your example and start working,even as canon or AU fics,the relationship between her and Ben. Even if they don't,I wil try to do this on my own. Eager to see what the next update has in store for me and the other folks who read this,so you better keep writing when you don't have anything else to do. It would be a shame if the story was discontinued or not going beyond this chap. Thanks ever so much for chronicling their lives together,and for making me fall in love with younger Nellie Lovett by reading your tale. It's always nice when it happens,even if I will get to tell her my love for her,but oh,well. I can always pretend that she already knows that and that I wish her more leisure time with Benjamin. See ya,till the next update. Bye.

This was a cute chapter :) glad to see you're continuing this story!

Ohh.. You have to update soon :))))))

update?

I love the plot and I hope you update soon. Your story is beautifully written.

hah you make my attempted chappy of a fanfic look like shit! that one's never getting published! mwah :*

mymy beckyy i didnt know you had it in you! i would say be ashamed but i read this stuff often so i caant talk ;) message me when ya want me to begin beta-ing again xxx

I love their playful, cute little relationship. . great chapter dear.

Though short, that was an adorable chapter :) Ben and Nellie are just so great! Can't wait for your next update!

Despite the new chap cutting short the Ben/Nellie stuff I would haveliked to see,I highly doubt that the following ones won't be long enough so that their romance can be smeared in every new moment as the story continues. I would be liar,though,if I didn't admit that their romance captivated me in a way that makes me wait for more to come. After all,I often said that Nellie is one of my favourite female Burton characters,right next to Lydia from Beetlejuice. Well,see ya till the next update,so you better not stop writing. Thank again for an update of a story regarding one of my favorite pairing in the ST fandom. See,I never mind if it's Benjamin or Sweeney. Just one of the two,so that Eleanor can have someone to love and love her back. I liked the bit with her wearing his shirt,that would be something.

More plsssss :)

pleaseeeee continue! TT

Haven't read a sweenett in a while...
Good job so far...Be careful of the use of some words because they feel odd given the timing of this story...G-spot for instance...I am not sure they even knew about that back then but whatever. Oh and you mentioned boxers, you could have said undergarments...It's the same. *shrug*
Update again soon and Merry Christmas!

xxx Lina :)

A change to M stuff? Fine with me. Just to get some Ben/Nellie things going at full throtle,if you get my drift. Keep up the good work. There is nothing like a smut scene in the morning. Makes me wish to be In Benjamin's place,then sweet Eleanor would be mine and mine alone. I'm gentle guy,not the bloody judge,so don't worry.

Mdwllqkdndnskakz! It's so amazing! Update now! I Lovett!