This chapter was way too choppy, the scenes barely had time to reach the page before they ended. I was too busy wondering what the hell was going on to rage

I have no words. Honestly, following this stuff becomes confusing at times.

You'd think he would realize that all it would take is a command seal being used commanding her to absorb/defeat/consume, whatever term works best in the story, any and all demon souls that she absorbs.

Problem Solved.

Fight the dead can be annoying

Man, that's mean.

Thanks anyway.

I just hope the addition of Yuria would be able to change the tide at this rate!

This is Final Genesis, signing out!

Well, I don't know about a lynch mob, but I know that I would like to know what's going to happen. Great battle scenes interwoven with one another to show just how the battles could go. Neither escaped unscathed, but one got a definitive win and the other seems to have won a Pyrrhic victory. Looking forward to just how bad or good things will go from here. Until next time.

Lynch mob? Sir, sad and depressing as it might be, Fate is a story built on tragedy. Without that bitter tinge, the story would be less sweet.

I have absolutely no idea what was happening during half of this chapter. Too much chaos, not enough descriptions, and too many abrupt scene changes

Cool! I love your story

This is incredible

Arrrgh! You better run you devious friging bastard! We shan't stop chasing you, hounding you, until this deliberate plot-twist is smoothened!

And before I forget, terrific chapter.

GrrrraAAAGGHGAGGHH
*Leads the mob in the hase*

I just hope you don't only know Fate/ Stay Night from the anime alone. If you do, then I'm pretty sure you can't maximize the potential the visual novel has. The game version, especially the Heaven's Feel route, should be very, very useful if you want to combine both worlds.

Considering that one Premature End was Shirou fighting a practically unlimited-mana-source, corrupted King Arthur (and winning), I really, really hope you know Fate/ stay night from the game. Sorry if I sound judgmental and all that, but I'm just very concerned.

LOVED IT!

Need more, faster.

Thanks for sharing.