| Reviews for On The Bridge |
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DragonScaleXV 4/12/13 . chapter 1Whoa. I'm actually starting to like "Neva" ;) |
GuiltyBystanders 2/25/13 . chapter 1SO. FREAKING. CUTE. |
Guest 1/13/13 . chapter 1 :) :) :) |
Baby Chichi 1/11/13 . chapter 1To the moon fanfic! YAY! |
Kasandra 1/1/13 . chapter 1 After watching pewdiepie, I am SO obessed with NEVA! I love the kiss! Make more plz! :) |
NinjaCookieXD 12/29/12 . chapter 1So cute :3 loved it ;D |
Skygaze Lily 10/20/12 . chapter 1Nnnnnnggghhh this was so cute and very well written! ;u; I wasn't a real fan of Neil x Eva before but this made me one. |
HOAnubisTS 9/12/12 . chapter 1This was really sweet :') I'm waiting for your new story, and I hope it's as awesome as this one! |
KindHeartedWriter 9/7/12 . chapter 1You did a great job! You kept the characters in line and everything. :D I hope to read more from you! |
xiLovePandas 9/5/12 . chapter 1GAHHH. This was adorable. XD |
Guest 9/5/12 . chapter 1 Youre the best! |
Sahara.Myst 9/4/12 . chapter 1How lovely. You got the personalities perfectly, I love the lead up to Neil's confession. I agree with the first reviewer however. The kiss was a bit sudden for my tastes, but I know that others feel differently about their romance stories. I enjoyed the read. |
The Deceiving Maiden 9/4/12 . chapter 1The kiss was a bit too sudden for my taste but the rest was good (_)b |
A reader 9/4/12 . chapter 1 this has made me happy |
Blaze0843 9/3/12 . chapter 1This was adorable. Really! I honestly ship these two as much as JohnRose, and I've only seen them in one game. Your grammar is good in your story, and I like how you managed to keep them in pretty good character. I would write a whole lot more if I wasn't on my phone right now. Keep it up! I'll actually be uploading a Eva/Neil story once I've finished it as well. Sincerely, Blaze |