Lyssie, have I told you lately how much I love you?! That was awsome! and I think you made me understand Tidus alittle bit better too!I still think he's a doofus, but at least I don't hate him now!^_^ Oh yes and forgive me but as a rabid Auron FAN I must do this: EEK! Aurie-sama, my Darling!XD

Wow. You're a truly talented writer. This piece is just as beautiful as "Choose". Keep up the good work.
//Jill

What an interesting way of making thngs real...nice work, almost poetic.

Awr. That was sweet. Well done. ^_^

Lovely, haunting prose... nice work!

Niiiiice. Great imagery, a touch of the surreal, and angst to go around. (The dead guy is just a bonus, huh?)

Hoping to see more from you...muchly impressed. =^__^=