Great story!

hello ranmafan. im wondering why you havent updated in a while because this fic is funny as well as written well. i hope to see an update and hopefully a ranma mara pairing.ttfn deucalion

This is a rare instance of the "Ranma becomes a demon" genre - humane and gentle, civilized and comfortable. The characters are realistically portrayed, and quite believable. The story develops at a good pace, not too slow nor too fast.

Nicely gone.
Mike

4 years is a bit long to wait to find out what her revenge was. Update!

keep writeing this

So, no continuation for this one, right? Pity...

Okay, so you haven't updated this in 4 years, so reviewing is kinda redundant, but what the hell..

Question: Ranma is a demon. Why the ** is he in Nerima dwaddling? Your plot device, that's why.

Also, if I were you, I'd cut the massive 'animenations' out, as in the sweatdrops, facefaults, chills when someone is talking about them, blood gushing down one's nose when perverted etc. I'm a huge fan of anime and manga, but they just don't fit into fanfiction.

Your writing is kinda... raw. It repeats itself, and feels very unedited. This is what I'd imagine a new author's first fic to be~~

Okay. I'm probably reviewing a bit prematurely, but I gotta get this off my chest:

AMG/Ranma crossover with demon!Ranma, full of win. Male!Ranma, probably thr first one I've seen, which automatically gives you +1 worship. Seriously, why can't people keep Ranma male when he goes god/demon? >_>' Fantastic.

However.. Ranma is dumb. He's pathetically dumbed down here. It makes me want to hurt him. Yes, we know Ranma isn't the most intelligent person, being quite the shonen archtype hero, but not even canon Ranma is this bad. Every time he says 'uh', blushes and stammers makes me want to hit that big red X.

But the 2 good aforementioned points and your pretty good writing and grammar keep me reading.

Hey, you! I got one thing to say to you about this fic . . .

UPDATE IT! I like it.

He-Who-Has-No-Name

Awesome story!

great story, waiting to see Mara revenge. please update soon

*Pokes author* Are you… dead?
Don't be dead! you have to finish this story!

cool story cant wait till you update

come on please update!

I hope you find time to finish this fic. Its really good.