I love your character development! It's hard to write such a realistic progression of life. I wish I could harness those emotions into a story like you can. I love your Jim especially! Lots of people like to draw him as always right. Heck, I like to read stories where Jim is always right. But by making it not really Terra Prime, making Jim paranoid and messed-up, you humanized him for me without destroying Jim Kirk. Thank you so much.

Oh my god. I don't know how these stories keep getting better, but it's seriously incredible. I've been reading this one in snippets all week around work, and I've loved every minute of it. Except the parts where I cringe over Jim's recklessness and paranoia, but I suppose that's to be expected. He's definitely grown up a little over the course of this story, and it's cool to see him do it. Thanks again for another great fic! :-)

Read the entire series in like a day in a half...and i've got a project due this thursday lol. I loved your story and can't wait for more from you! I'd never peg the roommate to be the culprit but I did suspect Romano (both Admiral and Son) to be hiding 'something' from Kirk. I also loved how you tied up all your loose ends and everything else! I enjoyed every minute of it :?).

I'm quite frankly in too much of a state of shock after reading all of this to say much, but know that this is absolutely brilliant. It's sadly under rated and despite the fact that I actually thought to myself 'I don't like this kind of story' the whole time I was reading it, I was nonetheless compelled to soak in every word. Simply captivating. Look forward to the third in your series.

Excellent, excellent story. Took me quite a few hours, but I've finally finished it. I love h/c and it had a good dose of that so for me that made it an especially appealing story. I can definitely see that you researched/learned alot of the medical facts. I'm currently in nursing school and going through my first medical surgical class and alot of the facts were right on - I applaud you for that. For me, you can tell a really good writer when they can make a story interesting even though there's not alot of action/adventure going on. You did that superbly! This was really a great story and I enjoyed reading it immensely. Now I can finally get back to my own studying... lol...

This story was fantastic! I am glad that I found it complete, as waiting for installments would have been very hard. With that said, I can't wait for the sequel.

Damn. I admit I'm new to the ST fandom and so excited for the new movie. It's great that talented people like you are out there creating these masterpieces ;)
Can't wait for more :D

Sad this one's over! But looking forward to the next :). I've enjoyed your work a ton! I used to prefer reading stories that dealt more with the friendship between Kirk and Spock but I think you've changed me to a Kirk and Bones girl...

Absolutely loved it! The writing is amazing and the storyline is fantastic! I've been reading this nonstop and I loved every minute of it; I'm kind of picky and there's almost always a part in any fic I'm reading where it lulls, but not in this one.
And (this is completely irrelevant but) as soon as it hit the scene where Jim walks in on his roommate "cleaning" I was freaking out over the fact it was him.
Keep up the great writing!

Wow! I hope you do another story.

Hi
I really enjoyed the 2 stories in the series . I cannot wait to start reading the next one. Keep up the good work

I really liked this story. It was great to see Jim and McCoy working together to solve a problem even before they were on the Enterprise. Even though Bones was grumpy at times, it was clear he cared for his new friend, and it looks like Jim is well on his way to becoming a great captain.

This was the perfect ending to a stunning story. I really like your writing! Well done, and thank you!

I READ THIS LAST NIGHT BUT WAS TOO TIRED TO LET YOU KNOW.

THIS WAS A GOOD WRAP UP. IT WAS A TERRIFIC STORY. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR STORY TELLING. I DON'T THINK I CAN TELL YOU MORE OF HOW MUCH I LIKE IT WITHOUT LOSING THE SOUND OF SINCERITY. I WILL MISS YOU UNTIL YOU WRITE AGAIN.

THANK YOU FOR ALL YOU'VE DONE.

Awesome fic! Not only was it well written, but it also had a morals to the story. I also appreciated how the character were changed by what had happened and not all things just go back to normal. Thank you for posting!