Very good chapter.
I really like the doll power you came up with.

Multiple precognition, I should have known. But I do know who the other antagonists are. And May, a human lie detector? Awesome! About December's power, he can't tell anyone about the possibilities of the figure before they happen and forgets them after they happen? But he can talk about facts, but can't change or stop them, right?

:O... WOW! That's all I can say...WOW! Got me again!

Finally sat down and started reading this again. Sorry I waited so long.

Great job with the story. Still waiting to see what December is plotting.

Only problem after I read through all the chapters, is that Madame Oreille is not a CIA agent. She is an information broker that only recruited Hei on behalf of the CIA in S2.

Very nice chapter. I wonder if it is still a little part of Izanami being in Yin or if Izanami had always used Yin's powers (that were dormant in an unevolved Doll) and now that Izanami had shown her what she's capable of Yin used her powers in self-defence.
I had re-watched the last episode a couple of times and I'm now pretty sure that July didn't die in the end: Izanami took the SPECTER that was hovering above the boy and not his soul/lifeforce. As shown in season 1 a Doll blacks out when it is 'disconnected' from its specter. So you might be indeed right that the little Doll is still among the living.
No I'm off to the next chapter.

Talk about cliff hangers. Some of the wording you wouldn't use in some sentences, didn't make much scene at first. Had to read to some and a pharaoh or two to get the jist. And you might a lol proof reading done. But ok, Hope that helps.

Now all most everybody knows all most everything. Very confusing on with it all. Some words missing and typoes but very good and understand. I've been taking some writing classes to help with my critiquing skills, let me where I need to work on for improvement.

I'm sorry. I don't like :(

well written: but I see not plot or storyline developing...

This is so COOL! You really know all of your characters, and thanks to you I now know that I have not seen season 2 yet and the Netflix where I watched season one is really behind. Here I am trusting is to give me both seasons :( Well no longer! I will be back!

I'm always interested in a good DtB story.

One rather major complaint about your writing so far. I don't think you need to add the constant reminders at the end like:
"his contractor ability"
"as Conctrators are supposed to be very logical beings"

Those are just two examples I pulled from this chapter. I have actually noticed a number of them through the first 7 chapters of this story.

I also think you need to work on your scene transition. We go from one scene with a set of characters to the next without any warning at all. It makes it hard to follow and messes with the flow of the scenes as well.

Yeah! Bada$$ action sequence! A few random spelling mistakes, but otherwise another stupendous chapter. Keep it coming my friend! So many great moments...sigh!

I know it (EPIC)! Just as I thought. One crazy day!

Irene an emotional contractor?

Could it be more than friendship forming?

guess who's back..

That August is a slippery one, then again so is Happy Ending.

Don't tell who what?

When can I expect character 16?

You must have wrote fast, a few typoes and words are missing
ofaf over n out

A lil confusing, bit of not your best English skills. With a dash hard to follow or understand. Other than that, ok. End build up could use a boost too. Just try some constructive criticism, not to be mean.

next time: enter, August 7...

and now the stage is set for a magic trick or two! very cool. I really liked AUgust as a conniving and calculating character. good to see him back in the game! :)

you spelt BK201s namw wrong it is lee not li.