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I'm sorry it took so long for me to review this, I'd always start reading this at work, hafta stop and restart another day lol sooo I looove it, you have me eating out of your palm for whats next. Is Annie really not Anna? Who was talking thru Annie? Can't wait for whats next :)

i love this! especially the two languages thing, and Annie, its awesome!

So far so good! Keep going! :D

Sorry that I don't review that often, but I do read the story. Great chapter, I love the ending for some reason, like, the way you worded it. :)
And I'm still trying to find the book this is based on at the library. No luck yet.

:D So cool so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ooh, nice! Cool twist! XD

Great job, amazing writing style.
I like the describing part.
You did great and attached me to it even if I didn't read the original book
Keep Going

This was very well written and I like it, even though I haven't read the book it's based on. Also very cool that you wrote it in two languages. :)

This was very interesting. I've never really heard of this book,or the characters, so I really had no idea what was happening, but I liked it.

Beautiful...
you are an amazing writer, keep it up 3

Very nice so far. :) Keep going! I want to see when Anna comes back...she's gonna come back, right? XD

Love it! The characters are written just like they are in the book. Excellent job :)

Wow! I'm so excited! Thank you so much for sharing this. I'm intrigued now.

Good story! Can't wait until the next chapter. I really admire you for doing it in two languages!