|Reviews for Lessons|
| Baker Alchemist Strawberry 9/10/12 . chapter 1
This is rather an excellent one-shot. Well-written, to the point, and I could almost picture this happening, though perhaps not entirely - I don't recall Enrique having so much animosity for his mother like something like this would generate.
But still, thumbs up! I can't even offer any con-crit, because there is little I can offer advice on improving!