I just have to say AWESOME!

great writing and I totally agree with you that there's one too many ash screw up plots on the net and you have my thanks for making misty mess up in this one

Aww... haha, that was a cute story. I almost forgot about the Ketchup Song... hahaha.. nice touch.

Very amusing, I liked it. Nice job. :)

i've really enjoyed this story so far but i didn't really get the whole underwear thing at the end of the chapter i was wondering if you could explain it to me btw. thanks for the story and keep writing you're really good

I love the ending :)

WOW! i absolutely loved this story! it was so funny lol! excellent. well done.

and that ketchup song thing wit pikachu was frickin adorable!
great great great keep writin! x

Feakin Hillarious! God ur good. AAML FOREVER! please write more. YOu've got a talent so use it!

oh, hahaha, i loved the prank ash and misty pulled on gary! And the pikachu... oh, hahahahahahahahaha, I'm reading this for the fifty-seventh time and I'm still laughing! you and your stories are definitely on my faves list!

hello i just finished your story and i must say it was excellent also as you can tell my real name is in my email so i don't know why i made up a fake name and finally i only review on the last chapter i feel it saves time when you say good things about a story all at once keep up the good story writing and if you don't read this then disregard but if you do feel free to email me if any problems with writing typing ever arise no i am not some kind of freak just too trusting and friendly with people

wow,,so cute..love your fanfic! write some more please!

Awesome story.

now THAT was a ammrn to remember. thank you very much for some good ol' originality!

this is a very good story, and funny

I like your story so far, but in the future could you hit the enter key?

lol, god I loved it! I gotta remember that dare, my brother will kill me, but it'll be so much fun. That will be the king of camping dares. lol thanks and killer story. AAMR Forver!

Nice story! Love the pranks they pulled (except the bikini one)

ASH/MISTY FOREVER!