Awwww! Sweet. Nicely done.

This is so clever! I love how you have intwined some of the more modern with the Shakespearean! I'm very, very impressed! Hope t hear more from you soon! :) x

Awwwww... you made my heart melt :')

I love this story! "It's so fluffy I'm gonna die!" :P . I'm so glad there's a happy ending. You did make my day brighter, I thank you. & I'm so excited that you've started another story! I can't wait to see where it will go!
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Wow, that was so nice. I completely loved it and it did make me quite happy to read it. It was a beautifully written scene.

Aaw so cute, but also a little bit naughty with G sneaking into the abbey. Still it was fabulous and I can't wait to read more (or is that the end?)

A lovely start, at least I'm hoping there will be more? I have to admit, I was a little cautious at first when you said you would be adding some lines into it, because Shakespeare's really is poetic language that I thought would not suit the characters all that much, but the way you altered it and incorporated it into your scenes was very well done. Just love the romance! Please write more soon.

really great story. will there be more to this story?

how wonderfully fluffy. :) I loved it!

AWWWWWWW! This is so sweet! and so romantic!

I think you did a great job of re-interpreting the Romeo and Juliet balcony scene with Maria and the Captain! I could totally see something like this happening!