Meh? What just happened? Plese tell me beetle dosnt actually die! To much beetle\jenna!

Very intriguing. I think this would be better as the opening of a muti-chapter fic, because theere are so many loose ends, but I can see that you wanted it centered on a Sep/Syrah relationship, which worked too. Maybe you could write a sequel? I would like to read more!

-Jemi

I don't like how you said it didn't matter. No offense, but that was not a good way to end it.

Hehe, sorry I'm at school. However, I likes the stroy (too bad that Marcia is gone/dead, though). Buy hey, it's nice anyways.